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You catch my eye,
like a white flash in the darkness.
And when you look at me,
my chest is tight,
and my heart starts to pound.

Whenever you talk,
I strain to listen.
Whenever you listen,
I’m afraid to talk.
It’s true, you make me freeze everywhere.

But when that day comes,
as I imagine,
I’ll walk up to you,
and simply say a word
of hello.
This is a poem I wrote a while ago. :)
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Inchaotus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
While this is one I'd probably just favorite and move on, I did want to point out that when you submit a piece on deviantart, you have to option of using a creative commons lisence for your work, which include no derivations and no commercial use.

Legally speaking, that's much more robust than just writing a copyright at the bottom.

Good work, though ;)
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AshleighStone Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, thanks for the tip! I'll look into it! :)
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